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ReplyDeleteDid you know that Thomas Edison’s greatest invention is the light bulb? Now the lightbulb, are safe for being used and it doesn’t flicker or burn out by the filament. The light bulb benefits the whole world by electricity. I think the light bulb is the best invention because I am able to watch TV. As I explained Thomas Edison’s best invention is the light bulb. Without it everything in the world that runs on electricity would not work.
daer Dravin i liked what you said it made me think i sould pike it if i cood do a nother.
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You did a realy good job!I like how you said it doesn't burn out.I think you worked out By Iliana:)
DeleteI think yours is the best and you rilly make a rilly good pont.
Deletei agree beacause the light bulb helps us see in the dark.
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ReplyDeleteDo you know what a kintoscope is? Well keep reading and you will learn more! The kintoscope is a motion picture camera made by Edison that put sound and shows together and makes a movie. The kintoscope benefits people that love to watch movies in the theatre. It’s the best because I love to watch movies and shows in the theater or at my house. If you like to watch movies you will agree this is Thomas Edison’s best invention.
I think you made a good point and I really liked your essay.What really caught my attention was that you explained why you thought it was the best.
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daer hannah you make the kinetoscope sond very enteresting.
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Hannah I like your projact. I like how you said if you like to watch movies you will agree this is Tomas Edison's best inventon.You work very hard on this project.By Elizabeth
DeleteHannah I like how you compare the Kitnoscope to watching moivies at home
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Nicholas
ReplyDeleteThomas Edison made over 1,000 inventions and I think the lightbuld is the most useful and safe. Keep reading and you’ll find out more. The light bulb lights up a room by the burning filament inside the glass container. The light bulb benefits anyone who wants to do stay awake during the night. I think the light bulb is Edison’s best invention because you couldn’t see during the night. Now you can! We still use it to this day. You can clearly see this is the best invention Thomas Edison ever made!
The lightbulb is the safest invention. Hockey rinks would be lit by candel light and the wax would drip on the ice and melt it. The essay was GREAT. It was very hooking.
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dear Nicholas you are good at macking the litebolb
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ReplyDeleteHave you ever had an x-ray? Read more and you will learn what the x-ray is. Thomas Edison’s screen for the x-ray was calcium tungstate that made the images brighter. It’s easier to read the images when they are brighter. The x-ray benefits sick or hurt people. I think that the x-ray is Thomas Edison’s greatest invention because it saves many lives. In conclusion it is clear that this is his greatest invention!
you did a verry nice job! I thought your intouduton was nice.Ava
DeleteHi John!Your project is awesome the introduction and ending is AWESOME!
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i think u did a great job on the x-ray.it is so awesome.from jk.
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ReplyDeleteHave you ever seen or had an X-ray? Edison invented the medical X-ray, and I think it is his best over 1,000 inventions. It helps diagnose and find many medical conditions. Tungstate screens make the pictures bright .The X-ray benefits any injured person or animal. I think the X-ray is the best because a lot of people would get sick or hurt and doctors couldn’t find what was wrong without this technology. You can clearly now understand that the X-ray is an important product .This is Thomas Edison’s best invention, you should agree because a lot of people would have been dead by now, maybe even you.
I think you chose a pretty good invention. Your report was very informative.
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Very hooking intro. The whole essay was very interesting. Even though we have the same topic, I think you essay was written better. That last scentence was very mind chaging.
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The electric pen sounds good. I think it is very good. copeing would be hard without it.
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ReplyDeleteWhat do you think the kinetophone,kinetogragh and kinetoscope did ?keep reading and you’ find out. The kinetophone was a cabinet with a peep hole that showed peep shows. They benefit people who like movies. Than my family couldn’t watch movies without it .If you enjoy watching movies than you should like them.
Taea like what you did .And i like the second to last sentence. Hannah
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ReplyDeleteI than Thomas Edison’s best invention is the phonograph .Do you know what a phonograph is? The phonon graph records your voice and music. For recording and music you turn a crank and press a stylus. Ti benefits people for entertainment and they record messages. This is Thomas Edison’s best invention because if you didn’t have the phonograph you would not have music for entertainment. If you like music the phonograph record’s music back to you.
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ReplyDeleteI know Tomas Edison made over 1,000 inventions but I think the light bulb is the best out of all. The light bulb produces light by turning a light switch on and off by using a filament made out of bamboo. Put it in glass bulb and plug it in it glows! It benefits people all over the world who want light. I think Tomas Edison’s best invention is the light bulb because without the light bulb we would still be using candle light. In conclusion I believe the light bulb is the best.
you did a realy good job on your essay and you worked realy hard and I like how you explained how the lightbulb is the best invention from amadou.By
Deleteyour essay proves that the light bulb is a good and useful invention. you put a lot of important facts. you expained how the light bulb was made, that was really good. i am not sure if the light bulb is the best or the x-ray.
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I agre to what you wrote it is verry nice. I like how you wrote he made over 1,000 inventions.Ava
DeleteI agree that the light bulb is Thomas Edison grates invention
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ReplyDeleteHave you ever had a x-ray taken. Thomas Edison invented the x-ray and I believe it was his best invent chon. The x-ray takes pictures of peoples bones. The x-ray is important to people that get really sick and get broken bones. I think that the x-ray is the best invention because it helps people and saves people. Inconclusion the x-ray is the best of Thomas Edison invention.
Katie
ReplyDeleteDo you know that the phonograph is Thomas Edison’s best invention? Read on to find why I think that is true. To make it work, speak into mouthpiece and your voice vibrations will dent the foil. To play it back run the needle over the groves and you will hear the sounds recorded. The phonograph benefits people who want to make contact to friends and do not want to use mail. I think the phonograph is Thomas Edison’s best invention because it was one of his most incredible, unlikely inventions. Now I hope you see that the phonograph is Thomas Edison’s best invention.
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ReplyDeleteI think the firestone tire is the Thomas Edison’s best invention because in these days we can drive. It connects to the engine and that is how it works. The firestone tire help benefit the automobile. I think the firestone tire is the best invention because if we couldn’t drive and we would have to walk everywhere. We would get tired of walking and you would fall asleep. It is clear that the firestone tire is the best invention because we need to get to places like work. Walking is slow and running is tiring there for driving is the fastest way.
Amadou your project is so funny and you really makes me get crack up.Your project is AWESOME!I really like when you said we would get tired of walking and fall asleep!
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Very funny! It Hooked me in. It's pretty true that ther would not be any NASCAR if there was no Firestone tires. You pretty much changed my mind about the x-ray.
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Amadou that is very funny and i like when you said i think the firestone tires is the best because if we couldn't drive we would be tired and fall asleep.
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This one is the funnyest because you said The fierstone tier help befor you said benefit's that's funny there. Jacob C
DeleteAmadou I think yours was realy good because you stated that it would be harder to get to any sort of place with any automobile from Garrett.
DeleteAmadou your essay is funny because I like the part where it said we would get tired and you would fall asleep.
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I think you did very well because you really explaned what you wrote. You also made it very easy to understand. You are right when you said that walking is slow and driving is faster. Alexa
Deleteyes you are right after automobile were it says i think that they are his best invtion if we could not driv we would have to walk wich is tiring.cars are the fastest way.by ERIC.
DeleteI really like your essay.You did a really good job explaining why you thought it was the best Keep up the good work!
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Leinala
ReplyDeleteDo use the light bulbs in your house? Because Thomas Edison invented the light bulb! That’s why I think the light bulb is his best invention ever! The light bulb gives light and is safer than using candles and your fireplace to light your house. The light bulb is important Because it is safer for inside your home and the street at night. I think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention because when people bought it Edison sold a lot of light bulbs. It was clear to see that the light bulb was Thomas Edison’s best invention
After i read your essay i wished i picked the lightbulb . And now i think it's the best invention.
Deletei like yours it is really good. you made some really good points about the light bulb. i am unsure if the light bulb is the best or the x-ray. i also agree light bulbs are safer then fireplaces.
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Leinala I like how you used a question and then something intriesting in the beginning after the question. I wished I should have chosen the lightbulb instead of the phonograph. In conclusion I wrote this to tell you how much I like your essay.
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Tia
ReplyDeleteI have heard that Thomas Edison has made over 1,000 inventions, but I think the x-ray is the best of all. The electromagnetic energy makes the x-ray work and it diagnoses medical issues with the calcium tungstate screens. The x-ray benefits people in the medical field, and people who are hurt. I think x-rays are Thomas Edison’s greatest invention if there weren’t any x-rays we couldn’t tell if people were injured and many people on earth would be dead. So as you have read that is why I think the x-ray is the best.
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ReplyDeleteDo you know what the kintoscope is? The kintoscope shows films if you look through the scope and it works by the slides inside a wooden cabinet and light shining through. The kintoscope benefits people who want to be entertained. I think Thomas Edison’s greatest invention is the kintoscope because I like to go to the movies. In conclusion I believe that the kintoscope is Thomas Edison’s greatest invention.
I think your essay was really good. Keep up the good work.
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Alexa
ReplyDeleteThomas Edison has made many amazing inventions but I think the light bulb was the best. It was so good we still use it now. The light bulb works by the filament burning inside the bulb, but if any air gets into it the fire will burn out. All you have to do is turn on the lights. The light bulb benefits cities , towns, and people who need light in their house schools and even the world. I think the light bulb is the best because if there was no light bulb school would be much harder. We would have to have a candle on our desk or have trouble seeing, reading or writing. Because of all these reasons I am sure that you can tell that5 the light bulb was Thomas Edison’s best invention.
Brianna
ReplyDeleteHave you heard of the phonograph? Do you know what the phonograph does? Keep reading and you will learn more about Thomas Edison’s best invention. The phonograph records people’s voices. People can play the message back by turning a crank while pressing a stylus against the foil. The phonograph benefits people that want to keep in touch and people in circus shows and in businesses. I think the phonograph is Edison’s best invention because it’s like an answering machine and it started the music industry. As you had read the phonograph is the best invention of all times! If you like talking to your friends you should love the phonograph!
i think you did a good job. i love music and talking so this is good. you explained how it works and it is cool. maybe i agree with you,i am not sure. your essay is really good.
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Hi,Brianna I liked your sa.The last sentence you wroteI really liked the best I never thought of the phoneograph as if you like talking to your friends you should love the phoneograph!I never thought about the phoneograph like that.Love your BFF,Leinala
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ReplyDeleteI think Thomas Edison’s best invention is the quadruplex telegraph. Do you know what that is? I’ll tell you. The quadruplex telegraph can send four messages at the same time. The quadruplex telegraph benefits the people of the world. I think the quadruplex telegraph is the best because it’s the leading invention to unwired cellphone. Now you see that we would not have cellphones without the quadruplex telegraph.
Corin I think your essay is very unique. I think the Phonograph is like the Quadrupled telagraph because there both like a telaphone.
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ReplyDeleteI think the electric pen is the best because people might need to use it at work at home and at school to copy paper. By developing the electric pen as a perforated. Multiple copies can be mad at once! The electric pen benefits workers who need to copy paper. I think the electric pen is Tomas Edison best invention because you can make copies for work at home or at school copy books for people if they like that book. If you have something to write down you should think the electric pen is the best
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ReplyDeleteWhat do you think Thomas Edison’s best invention is? I don’t know about you but I think the kinescope is. The kinescope makes it so you can watch short little videos. By looking threw a little hole. The kinescope benefits families who like to watch movies and listen to music. I think the kitnagragh, kinescope and kitnaphone are Edison’s best inventions because I like to watch movies. If you like to watch movies I think you should agree with me
I like yours becoause you have a rilly good pont .Hayden
Deletei agree with you about the kintoscope beacause i like to watch movies.
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Hi Garrett!Your project is great!I like the intruduction!I also the the ending of it.This project is AWESOME!
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I love the way you explained why you thought the kitnagragh /kitnascope /kitnaphone was the best.
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Jordan
ReplyDeleteThomas Edison had a lot of good inventions but I think the light bulb is the best invention of all time. Edison and his team made a small version of the light bulb that could fit in small spaces. To make it work the light bulb has to be vacuum shut. The light bulb benefits cities, states, the world and streets. They help people see everything. I think the light bulb is the best invention because the light doesn’t just light up the whole world it also helps cars know when to go. The stoplight uses the light bulb. Too. As you can see the light bulb is the best invention Thomas Edison ever invented.
You do make a good point Jordan. Keep up the good work.
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Alambir
ReplyDeleteI think Thomas Edison’s greatest invention was the Phonograph. A phonograph records messages by speaking into it. It presses another stylus against the foil. The phonograph records music read aloud and book,ect. It was Thomas Edison’s greatest invention. I would like to have it as a story book and a music recorder
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ReplyDeleteIsn’t it amazing that when you flip a switch the lights come on? Thomas Edison invented the light bulb. Edison burned cotton and carbon in a hot oven the and then it created a filament got so hot it glowed to make a light bulb work. The light bulb benefits people, states and cities by lighting them up. I think the light bulb is the best invention because the light bulb is lighting up the world. If you like to stay up when it is dark out then you would agree that the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention.
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ReplyDeleteThomas Edison made more inventions than you can count. I know that the light bulb is not his favorite invention but I think that it is his best. Light bulbs were made from glass and there’s something called a filament that gets so hot that it glows .it uses wires so we can flip on a swich on and lights up the whole room. I think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s greatest invention because you can’t see without light. Light bulbs benefit every country that needs light bulbs.in space you could tell that there are lights. Clearly the reasons I have discribed prove that the light bulb is Edison’s greatest invention of all time.
Wow Eric you madegreat point.I really liked your essay.
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Bashar Alam
ReplyDeleteI think that Thomas Edison's best invention is the light bulb. Without it, how could you see? The light bulb works by the electric current going through the filament and it heats up and glows. The light bulb benefits anyone that needs the light. I think the light bulb is important because we can't see things in the dark without the light of the sun. As I stated, I believe the light bulb is the best invention of all time.
I like how you started with a questin so it makes the reader want to keep reading. Brianna
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ReplyDeleteWhat do you think Thomas Edison’s best invention is? I think it is wireless electricity. What do think this is? Wireless energy controls everything by turning off and on the switch the electricity will go on. It benefits the light bulb and homes. Electricity is the best because if we don’t have electricity you will fall into a hole or bump something. If you like video games you should agree wireless electricity is necessary and by far Thomas Edison’s best invention.
Nicky i like what you said abuot the video games and i think i like wireless electricity now.Hannah
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ReplyDeleteI think Thomas Edison’s best invention is the electric pen. The electric pen can copy writing and sand boring. It uses a small motor to push a needle up and down. It uses a stencil to copy the ink through the paper. It benefits the jobs that have to write a lot. It benefits the lawyers. The electric pen can also copy money at once. In conclusion, it is Thomas Edison’s best invention.
Ava
ReplyDeleteIf you love music and movies read this to find out how the movie and music industry started! The Kinephone Phonograph and the Kinescope almost synchronized together. It turns out that it is like a tv in a box black and white. They benefit people who like movies and music. I think they are Thomas Edison’s best inventions because I love movies and music. I hope you like the kintscope/ kinetphone and kinetgraph as much as I do.
I rely like what you typed. I like the firt paragraph.
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hi Amadou I really like your essay I like that you said first that first you siad that in are we and then you said that whey back then of what happen in the old day
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No,I have never had a x-ray taken.You could work a little on spelling,but over all it was raelly good.Hayden have you ever had a x-ray taken?
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ih bashar I like your invenchin i have never head that a lightbulb is made out of flames . Neat work.
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