Monday, December 17, 2012
Opinion Essay: Mrs. Cwynar's Class
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Brandon
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, when people are walking in the dark they don’t bump into each other. Secondly, when people work late they will be able to see what they are working on. Thirdly, people who drive their car will be able to see where they are going. In conclusion this is why the light bulb is Edison’s best invention.
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Deletegreat job Brandon
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Maria
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, it makes light for people who have to stay up late and work in the dark. Secondly, it will help other people overcome fears of the dark. Thirdly, people don’t have to take chances of their babies getting burnt from candles. In conclusion, these are the three reasons why the light bulb was Edison’s best invention
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ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, it was not to dangerous compared to the gas lamp and not to bright compared to the Arc light. Secondly, it lit many homes thirdly; it burned for a very long time. In conclusion these are three reasons Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb.
i like how you said it was not dangerous compared to the gas lamp and not to bright compared to the ark light.
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i like how u actually put the names of diffrent lights : ]
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Deletei like when you sad about the gas lamp:D
Jon
ReplyDeleteMy favorite invention made by Thomas Edison is the light bulb. First, It doesn’t hurt anything like gas lamps that could catch fire. Secondly it’s not dangerous and won’t burn your fingers. Thirdly It helps people when it’s night it lights up the whole entire room! Those are the reasons why the light bulb is my favorite invention.
You made great points about the light bulb. It was epic:)
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DeleteMaggie
DeleteI think your topic sentence was great
connor
Deleteilove the light bulb. :D
BEN
DeleteYOUR REASONS WERE EPIC:I:D I think the light bulb is Thomas Edisons best invention TOO!
Jackson
DeleteJon I like how you said it does not hurt
Alexis
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, it replaced gas lamps which are dangerous. Secondly, it made him rich and famous. Thirdly, it is the invention he is known for and we use it every day. In conclusion, these are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb.
Tou did realy good on your work. you now what to do.connor
DeleteAlexis i loved what you said it was fantstick.
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ReplyDelete“There are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb.” Firstly, the light bulb is the best because they wouldn’t catch on fire like the gas lamp. Secondly, people’s homes wouldn’t be too bright like they were from the arc light. Thirdly, you wouldn’t have to get a lot of wood for the fires. You could just relax. These are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb.
I like how you said you can just relax.
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Brennan
Ben
DeleteYour reasons were great! I think your best reason was: The light bulb would not catch on fire like the gas lamp.
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DeleteZakir
DeleteI like your 3 reasons and i think it was the best
your review is really good.I also like the incounclusion.
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Connor
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Tomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, everyone was buying it. It was a huge success. Secondly, it helped a lot of people see at night. Thirdly, it lit up New York and a lot of cities and they loved it. In conclusion, these are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb.
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DeleteBen
Deletegreat reasons!I think your best reason was:evreyone was buying it:D
i love the light bulb and great points awesome:)
DeleteNice reasons connor.The light bulb is the invention I Wrote about,too.
DeleteCheyanne
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, the light bulb lit up New York and everyone wanted one. Secondly, there were already two main types of artificial lights that were the gas light and the arc light. These were too dangerous and too bright for homes.so he made the light bulb thirdly; he got inspired by the solar eclipse to make the light bulb. In conclusion these are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb.
I like the points you made about why Thomas Edisons best invention was the light bulb.
DeleteMaggie
Deletei like how you said it lit up new york and after that eveyone wanted one
Gia
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the firestone tires. Firestone tires are the thing that took us away from horse buggies. For the first time drivers could change their own tires because of the demountable rim tires. In the first Indy 500 was held. Firestone tires were on the winning car. In conclusion, these are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison best invention was firestone tires.
You did a verry verry good job Gia Nathan
DeleteAnna
DeleteYou made really good points about why the firestone tires were his best invention. Your parougraph was amazing!!!!
your reasons were amazing and your vocabulary was
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Audrey
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was The Electric Pen .Firstly, the electric pen is the best because after a couple days of it being in the market dozens of agents across the east and west coast wanted it.Secondly, the electric pen had a second life Samuel O’Neill converted it into the first electric tattoo needle .Thirdly, it helped business men copy documents plus it was leading to the photo copier. In conclusion, there were three reasons why Thomas Alva Edison’s best invention was the electric pen.
you did lots of work it was itresing i leared a lot from it love it ciera
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DeleteAwesome invention pick Audrey!I think your reasons were really goood and loved your conclusion!
AWESOME :D FROM jon and neo
DeleteMaggie
Deletei like how you said... "aftera couple days of being on the market dozens of agents across the east and west coast wanted one."
I like what you said you really must have studed a lot. You sure paid atention to Mrs.Cwynar when we were reading Thomas Edison The Great Inventor.
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Very nice work Audrey.It would be cole to use the electric pen.from Erik
DeleteYou did a good job. We would't be photo copy stuff.
DeleteAWESOME work that was a good point u were awesome : ) Jon
Deleteciera
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, it was not dangerous like fire so we can use it everywhere. Secondly, it helped people see in the dark so they can see and not run into anything. Thirdly, it lasted longer than a fire so you can use it often. In conclusion, these are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb
I like the reasons that you made. it was AWSOME.
Deletegreat job you did great i love it.It had great reasons why it was his best invent Ciera
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DeleteAnna N.
DeleteAwesome invention pick CC!I really love your reasons!
olivia
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, it lit up New York and after that everyone wanted one. Secondly, we still use it today but it is not the same. Thirdly it was clear, bright, and free from flickering.Inconclusion, these are three reasons why I think the light bulb was Tomas Edison’s best invention.
I like the points you made about the light bulb. I think the light bulb is his best invention.
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DeleteMaggie
DeleteI like how you said "it lit up New York City."
Know got me thinking of Thomas Edison every night in bed.
DeleteNathan
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. First, the light bulb is the invention we think of when we hear the name Thomas Edison. Secondly, Edison got tons of money selling the light bulb. Thirdly, everything we do at night is because of the light bulb. In conclusion, there are reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb.
Gia
Deletethe lightbulb is a awsome inventon.I like it because we have light in our home.
Brennan
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s BEST invention was the Electric Pen. Firstly, the Electric Pen is a copying system that makes it easier to write. Secondly, the Electric Pen was the first photocopier that Thomas Edison invented. Thirdly, while the battery continued to be a success. In conclusion, There are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s BEST invention was the Electric Pen.
Maggie
Deletethat was really good I didn't know you have so robust vocabulary! Since when did you get so robust vocabulary
that was a grat poiem and i like when you said the electric pen is a copying system that makes it easier to write. sinsely zakir
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DeleteJackson
ReplyDelete“There are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s BEST invention was The Light Bulb”.
Firstly, He made the light bulb safer than gas lamps. Secondly, light bulbs do not
Cost a lot of money. Thirdly, the success of his light bulb brought Thomas Edison
To new heights of fame and wealth, as electricity spread around the world.
In Conclusion these are 3 reason’s I think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best
invention
he did make the light bulb safer than gas lamps. neo
Deletethats a good point.awesome!neo and jon :)
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DeleteBen
DeleteI relly like your reasons awesome!!!
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DeleteI love your 3 reasones Deven
DeleteJackson you made a really point. They shure are safer than gas lamps.
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zakir
ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why al invention was the electric pen. Firstly, the electric pen is a copying system that makes it easier to write. Secondly, the electric pen was the first photocopier that al invented. Thirdly while the battery’s continued to prevent some sales, the electric pen proved to be a success. In conclusion, there are 3 reasons why Al’s best invention was the electric pen.
I love your writing. I think it was the best one ever! christian
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DeleteAwesome nice wrighting zakir ur good at wrighting Jon
DeleteErik
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons that Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, orders for the light bulb came from the USA and Europe, so it was famous. Secondly, this makes it easier to see at night. Everyone needs it. Thirdly, the light bulb has a special material called the filament that makes it glow, that’s pretty cool. In conclusion, these are 3 reasons I like the light bulb.
that is a great idea and good resons too.
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YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB ERIK!
DeleteSINCERELY,BRANDON
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DeleteAWESOME U DID A NICE JOB :)
Deleteconnor
Deleteyou had good reasons they are better than mian. :D
I LIKE HOW YOU SAID oders for the lightbulb came from USA and EURPE,it was so famous.
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Samantha
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the kinetoscope. Firstly, it was the first video camera and it showed them so it looked real. Secondly, the kinetoscope was a viewer with the peephole so people could watch. Thirdly, since the kinetoscope was made it helped start the movie business.in conclusion, these are 3 reasons the kinetoscope is the best invention.
Gia
DeleteI think it was right. It was the first tape recorder. I like it because we could not watch inportant stuff.Even eletronics wouldn't be here. We wouldn't be on a cumputer right now.
I think you made a great point. If there was a competishin for the Kinetoscope you would be in first place. alexis
DeleteAnna
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the light bulb. Firstly, it replaced the dangerous gas lamp and made lighting up homes safer. Secondly, it made him very famous and is what he his best known for today. Thirdly, people can use it to see what they are doing when it is dark. In conclusion, these are 3 reasons the light bulb was Edison’s best invention.
you made a great point I understand everything. Alexis
Deletei liked that the gas lamp was dangerous that you wrote
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DeleteYou have very good reasons why the light bulb is his best invention.:)
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joe
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was the Electric pen .Firstly, the Electric pen at the time was copying machine of the future .Secondly ,by the end of 1875 he had a dozen agents operating along the east and west coasts .Thirdly he also started selling them to the British and also to Cuba and south America .In conclusion, these are 3 reasons the Electric pen is Thomas Edison best invention
I loved your writting.Now I think the electric pen is Thomas Edison's best invention after I read your 3 reasons.It was so good.I really wish I wrote about the electric pen.Your friend Erik
Deleteit was great and it lots of reasons why the electric pen was his best invent by CIERA
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Deletegood choice.HOW DID YOU DO THAT THAT'S AMSOME!!!!!!!
DeleteSINCELY,
SAMATHA
I amazed with your comment. Your paragraph ROCKS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Deletei like how u said electric pen at the time was copying machine of the future
Deleteyou have alot of coments and it is very good
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Ben
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s BEST invention was the light bulb. Firstly, light bulbs are safe Secondly, everyone wanted to buy it because everyone loved it. Thirdly, the light bulb was a success. In conclusion, these are 3 reasons why the light bulb is the best invention.
connor
Deleteyou had good reasons why Thomas best invention was the light bulb.
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Deletewho ben you use very robust vocabalary.
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Anna
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s BEST invention was the Phonograph. Firstly, the Phonograph was to be tested and Edison sang “Mary had a Little Lamb. After he was done his voice was on the recording. Secondly the president was so impressed; he invited Edison over so he can give it a try .Thirdly the president woke his sleeping wife so she can give it a try. Inclusion these are 3 reasons why I think Edison’s best invention was the Phonograph
OLIVIA Wow you did a awesome job
DeleteI am impressed!about the phonograph baillie
Deletei am in prest by it.it was great you did a great job byCiera
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Deletei like how you said "the phonograph was to be tested and Thomas Edison sang Mary had a little lamb"
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ReplyDeletemy last name is not Womer
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Baillie
ReplyDeleteEdison’s Phonograph is now known as Answering machine but back then it was so exciting some people fainted. To Edison this was a big success he was not sure it would work but it did! He expected it to be for business but he was wrong it became good for traveling shows! In conclusion, this is the best invention Thanks for listening by.
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DeleteI think you made a great point. Know you got me thinking about the Phonograph being my favorite.Alexis
DeleteDeven
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 reasons why Thomas Edison’s best invention was Firestone Tires.’’ Firstly, Firestone was named after Thomas Edison’s friend’s nickname Firestone. Secondly, in 1911, the first lnd, 500 was held and Firestone tires were on the wining car. Thirdly, the Firestone network grew to 575 and offered 2,200 different items. In conclusion, Firestone tires are used on most cars and are very helpful.
great job go u. love it.joe
Deletenice reasons I like how you said he named it after his friend firestone :D
DeleteJackson
There are three reasons why the light bulb was his best invention .Firstly, Edison made the light able to travel which would light up there buildings and houses .This made it brighter at night. Secondly, everyone was buying it. Edison did great on succeeding with it. It was not a dangerous light because it had glass around it. In conclusion, these are three reasons why the light bulb is Edison’s best invention.
ReplyDeleteNice work.You made me think that kinetoscope is his best invetion.You know alot about Thomas Edison.from Erik.
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ReplyDeleteThere are three reasons why Thomas Edison’s BEST invention was the light bulb. Firstly, the light bulb lights up when it is night time. Secondly, the light bulb is brighter and last longer than a candle. Thirdly, the light bulb makes it easier to see and makes things safer to do. These are three reasons why the light bulb is the best invention.
nice work.I did the light bulb too.the light bulb rocks
DeleteJACKSON :D you did good neo
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DeleteAwesome job Christian! You really did your best-Thomas Edison would be proud! Now-work on the weather forecast.
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