Wednesday, January 16, 2013
Opinion Essay: Mrs. Kolesar's Class
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Kate
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The first reason that I believe the light bulb is Edison’s best invention is that cars wouldn’t be able to see at night because they wouldn’t have headlights. The second reason is that the light bulb is Edison’s best invention is that there were fewer fires because people didn’t have to use candles. My most important reason for choosing the light bulb as Edison’s best invention is that if we didn’t have light bulbs the world would be completely dark at night. I think you should agree that the light bulb is the best invention because you couldn’t drive cars at night, there are more fires, and the world would be dark at night.
Kate i think that you did a very good job.In some ways you realy changed my mind in some ways.
Deletei like your reasons and how you siad your invetion was the best from:Jay
Deletewhat a graet invention that you picked
DeleteMIA I agree because cars realy would not be able to see. I also agree because less fires would mean less homes burning down.
Deletei like that you where talking about the car lights so they can see at night .
Deletesome good stoff kate niomi
DeleteGianna
ReplyDeleteI think the electric pen is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The first reason that I believe the electric pen is Thomas Edison’s best invention is because it is popular with the world because it is in printers and everyone uses a printer. The second reason that the electric pen is the best invention is because the document being written can be written with the electric pen. My most important reason for choosing the electric pen as Edison’s best invention is because it is still used today. I think you should agree that the electric pen is the best invention.
I like how you said it is most important because it is still used today.
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Grat job you amost made me change my invenchen.You pick agrat ivenchen to tipe about .gianna
DeleteI liked how you said it is popular with the world because it is in printers and everyone uses a printer.
DeleteNoah
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The first reason that I believe the light bulb is the best invention is it doesn’t start fires. The second reason that the light bulb is the best invention is so doctors can see when they are operating on a patient. The most important reason for choosing the light bulb as Edison’s best invention is it helps cars see at night. These are the reasons why the light bulb is the best invention. Doctors can see so they don’t kill the patient, there will be no fires, no car crashes at night. I think you should agree the light bulb is the best invention.
Noah you did a good job on the light bulb.The light bulb realy helped henry ford and his car.The lightbulb I hatf to agre that it was one of his best inventions the storage battery also helped henry ford
DeletelUKE W I think you did a good job I agree IF DOCTERS DIDN`T HAVE A LIGHT THEY COULD HURT THE PAITENT
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DeleteNick
ReplyDeleteI think that the storage battery is Thomas Edison’s best invention first reason that I think is because the storage battery powered henry ford’s car The second reason the storage battery is the best invention because it has many uses for example the storage battery was the first thing to power henry ford’s car the most important reason is the storage battery was one of his most successful invention of his afterlife. I think you should agree that the storage battery is the best invention because the storage battery helped henry ford’s car and it had a lot of uses and it was one of his best afterlife inventions
that is some realy good reasons your friend niomi
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DeleteI think you did a awsome job,and you are right about it powering henry fords car.noah
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DeleteNick I never new that the Sorage Battery was the first
Deletething to powered Henry ford's car.
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Deletethe storage battery is a good essay to do you did a good essay
DeleteGarrett
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The first reason that the light bulb is Edison’s best invention is it doesn’t start any fires. The second reason that the light bulb is the best invention is if we didn’t have the light bulb we couldn’t drive at night and if they did they could crash. The most important reason for choosing the light bulb as Edison’s best invention is because if we don’t have the light bulb we wouldn’t have electrons. I think you should agree because we won’t have a lot of fires, no car crashes, and a lot of electrons.
you are right,cars wuldn't beable to see at night.noah
Deletei like how you siad your invention was the best.
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Elizabeth
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Edison`s best invention. The first reason that I believe the light bulb is Edison`s best invention is if you didn`t have it, you would not see because you need light to see! The second reason that the light bulb is Edison`s best invention is that we would not have a smart board for school. The most important reason that the light bulb is Edison`s best invention is would not have a night light without the light bulb. The light bulb helps you see, the light bulb gave us light. I think you should agree that the light bulb is Edison`s best invention.
I like when you said "we would not have smart boards for school."
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Tyler
ReplyDeleteI think the storage battery is Thomas Edison’s most important invention.The first reason that I believe the storage battery is Edison`s best invention is the storage battery helped power the first automobile The second reason that the storage battery is important is because it was the beginning of alkaline batteries my most important reason for choosing the storage battery as the best invention is that we still use it now Ithink you should agree that the storage battery is the most important produces an electric current ,the storage battery because it powers automobiles And we use it now.
i like how you said your invention was the best.
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Lauren
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Tomas Edison most important invention. The first reason I believe the light bulb is Edison best invention so they can not start fires. The second reason that the light bulb is the best invention is so doctors can see there pacients at night .It would be pitch black so you would not see You should agree that the light bulb is the best invention. Because to keep you safe and to see.
Jay
ReplyDeleteI think the electric pen is Thomas Edison’s most important invention. The first reason I believe the Electric pen is Edison’s best invention is it was one of the earliest invention with a consumer motor. The second reason that the Electric pen is the best is it was the beginning of printers. The most important reason for choosing the electric pen as Edison’s best invention is it helped lots of people and printed quicker. These are the reasons why Edison’s electric pen is the most important invention is because the Electric pen was one of the earliest invention with a consumer motor. And changed the world.
Niomi
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention .the first reason that I believe the light bulb is Edison’s best invention is you won’t crash your car at night. The headlights help you see the road when you’re not around any light .the second reason that the light bulb is the best invention is because you can see in your house at night. You won’t slip and fall in the shower. Now you can read in the dark. My most important reason for choosing the light bulb is so you don’t bump your head you should agree because you won’t crash your car and now you can read in the dark and you won’t bump your head.
Sara, Its great. Its clever how you said that you wouldnt crash in your car and you cant read in the dark.
DeleteMia
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison`s best invention. The first reason that I believe the light bulb is Edison`s best invention is because the whole world would be dark without the light bulb. The second reason that the light bulb is Edison`s best invention is because TVs and Smart Boards would not exist without it. My third reason the light bulb is Edison`s best invention is it is still used today. I think you should agree because the world would be dark, TVs and Smart boards would not exist and it is still used today. I think you should agree that the light bulb is the best invention!
Connor I think yours is exellent.
DeleteBella
ReplyDeleteI think the medical x-ray is Thomas Edison’s most important invention. The first reason that I believe the medical x-ray is Edison’s best invention is doctors can see if you have a broken bone. The second reason that the medical x-ray is the best invention is still used today. The most important reason for choosing the medical x-ray as Edison’s best invention if it wasn’t here they would never know if we broke something and so we are healthy. I think you should agree that the medical x- ray is the best invention because you can see if you have a broken bone is still use today and if it wasn’t here today they wouldn’t know if we broke something .
Lois
ReplyDeleteI think the phonograph is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The first reason I believe the phonograph is Edison’s best invention is it helped us with business and helped people to dictate letters. The second reason that the phonograph is the best invention is it was used to entertain people during traveling shows. My most important reason is it isn’t used today ,but it started the technology used today. We would not have to be able to record music. I believe the phonograph is Edison’s best invention helped business and to dictate letters it was used for traveling shows, it started the technology used today to listen to music. I think you should agree that the phonograph is the best invention.
I think yours was amazing
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Sara
ReplyDeleteI think medical x-ray is Thomas Edison’s best invention because the doctors would be able to help us better. It was first used on someone with a bullet wound in his hand .It helps with many medical conditions . Within months of this discovery, the first fluoroscopes were created.
Gia
Deletethat was amazing that is very true.we would not even know any thing going on in are body.
Colin
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s most important invention .The first reason that I believe the light bulb is Edson’s best invention because it helps from car crashing into a other. The next reason that I believe the light bulb is Edson’s best invention because people might walk into the wrong house. The third reason that I believe the light bulb is Edison`s best invention because people can walk into the around at night without bumping into thing. Because it help people see at night.
okay jay ham tyler
ReplyDeleteColin
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s most important invention .The first reason that I believe the light bulb is Edson’s best invention because it helps from car crashing into a other. The next reason that I believe the light bulb is Edson’s best invention because people might walk into the wrong house. The third reason that I believe the light bulb is Edison`s best invention because people can walk into the around at night without bumping into thing. Because it help people see at night.
Maura
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’ best invention. The first reason that I believe the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention is that without the light bulb class rooms would be dark. You could not see your books or papers. The second reason that light bulb is the best invention is that without the light bulb we would no Smart board with no Smart board you could not really learn The most important is that if people at drive night they could wreck. Because there would be no overhead lights either .I think you should agree because it would be dark in class rooms, there would no smart boards and and it would be very dangerous to drive at night .I think you agree that the light bulb is the best invention!
Olivia
ReplyDeleteI think the Electric pen is Thomas Edison’s most important invention. The first reason that I believe the electric pen is Edison’s best invention is that the electric pen is popular and it is still used today. The second reason that the electric pen is the best invention is that the forerunner of the phonograph is the electric pen. My most important reason for choosing the electric pen as Edison’s best invention is that everyone uses it because it is very creative. The first reason that I believe the electric pen is Edison’s best invention is that it is very helpful for people to print.
thosse are really good descibing the Electric pen
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ReplyDeleteConnor
ReplyDeleteI think the light bulb is Thomas Edison`s most important invention. The first reason that I believe the light bulb is Edison`s best invention because candles caused bad fires to happen and light bulbs don`t. The second reason that the light bulb is the best invention is that Edison lit up the world with the light bulb. The most important reason for choosing the light bulb as Edison`s best invention is that the light bulb is still used today. I think you should agree that the light bulb is the best invention because candles caused bad fires happen and light bulbs don`t, Edison lit up the world with it and the light bulb is still used today.