Wednesday, January 16, 2013
Opinion Essay: Mrs. Kostewicz's Class
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Jeremy
ReplyDeleteDo you think the light bulb is amazing? I really think so! Read on to find out more about Thomas Edison’s greatest invention! It helps you see in the dark. Now a days, to turn on a light bulb, you flip the switch. The light bulb helps almost everyone in the world. That’s why they say “Thomas Edison lights up the world”. I think this is the greatest invention created by Thomas Edison because than we wouldn’t have a lot of light. Also, other sources of light are pretty hard to use. This is why I think the light bulb is the best invention by Thomas Edison.
You got me hocked beacause you kept using explemation marks. you also explained it well.
DeletePeyton
good job with the vocabulary long paragraph
Delete-Chris
I like how you dascribe the lightbulb. For an example you said Thomas Edison lights up the world. It was good. Emily
DeleteI am on the edge the lightbulb being my best invention. I like how you said it helps almost everyone.
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Zoey
ReplyDeleteHave you ever thought of a world without light? I have and it’s not pretty. Thanks to Thomas Edison we don’t have to live like that. The light bulb gives a brilliant amount of light to anybody in a dark place using a carbon filament to light it up, a light bulb can light up a whole room. It can help anybody, but mostly people in dark spaces. The light bulb is the best, because it is reliable. Also without light it would be very hard to use most of Edison’s other inventions. That is why the light bulb is the best.
Your right,I can imagine a world without light.The light bulb has to be Thomas Edison's greatest invention
DeleteJeremy
Nice paragraph I like the way you explained it \
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I have thought of the world without light and it's not pretty either. Ella
Deleteit's good! I like how you said have you ever thought of a world without lights.I have and it's not pretty.
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Hannah
ReplyDeleteHave you got an X-Ray? I have they are pretty cool! An X-Ray is a machine that can take a picture of your bone. I think this is best invention of all time. The X- Ray takes pictures of your body. An this is how your work it you bush a button on the computer that is hooked up to the X-Ray. The X-Ray helps doctors. Plus to see what is wrong. In my opinion I think it was a great idea. Doctors in Edison’s time really needed it. I really hope you like it.
yours is really good because i really like how you put questions in you writing. you also put comments about it.
Deletejustin.
Hannah,
DeleteYour paragraph really, in my opinion, is a really awesome paragraph. Do you really just need to BUSH a button? What did you mean when you said "I REALLY HOPE YOU LIKE IT."? The same thing I said to Justin, it is a really short paragraph but it gives a lot of information in it's sentences. You really did a good job han han!
Kiki (Caroline)
You hocked me by saying it is cool to get a X-Ray. You also stated it clerly on how it works
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Justin
ReplyDeleteHave you ever heard of wireless electricity? I think the wireless electricity is the best invention Thomas Edison made. Wireless electricity helps us so we don’t have to pay money for the wires. Wireless electricity helps us have to have no things with wires wireless Wireless electricity is the best invention because you don’t have to have wires for it.
I really liked your essay Justin! I think wireless electricity was a great idea. Keep writing.
DeleteHannah
Justin,
DeleteI think you made a really good statement about how wireless electricity helps us. Your project really stands out because no one else chose wireless electricity. Although your paragraph is short, it really gives your readers a lot of informa5tion.
Caroline
Chris
ReplyDeleteWhat does an x-ray do? It will let you see your bones in your body and animals’ body too. X-rays also help doctors fix problems of patients if something is wrong, and will see if something is miss-placed, stuck or broken. This is Thomas Edison’s best invention. A reason that this is the best invention is that the x-ray takes pictures of your bones to see if everything is in good shape. Another reason is that it will help people who fix bone problems. It is a great invention to help with your bones. It will help everybody too. I think this is the best by Thomas Edison because it is helpful to people who help with bones this is an invention mostly for bones, and if Thomas Edison didn’t invent this we would not have it today
really good and it's detaild .It think you did the best you could.jonah
DeleteAWESOME!! Chris i think that was really good i like how you put so much detail in to your work
Deletejustin :)
Ava
ReplyDeleteWhat do you think Thomas Edison’s best invention is? Well if you’re thinking of the medical X-ray I am to, and it’s also my favorite invention. The medical X ray takes pictures of your bones. The medical X-ray helps people and animals. I think it’s the best because it can save people and animal’s lives. That’s why I think it’s the best.
Ava, Ava next time write a little more and I am thinking of the medical X-ray.Also I like how you described the medical X-ray.Describe more about why you think it is the best.
DeleteI liked it soccer girl. I should have did the x-ray but it's way to late now oh well but back to the subject I liked it beacause you were trying to perswade the reader to think what you were thinking anyway I like it. Taylor
DeleteCaroline
ReplyDeleteClick, click, click. The universal stock printer, in my opinion, is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The universal stock printer is designed to help the workers in stores so that they can do other things while the universal stock printer is printing the same share prices at one time. The universal stock printer works by printing out copies of the same share prices all at once. The universal stock printer helped Edward Calahan by making him thousands of dollars, as to Edison as well when people gave him the credit for what inventor Edward Calahan’s work had done for workers, which also means that Edison did not invent the stock printer. This is why, in my opinion, the universal stock printer is Thomas Edison’s best invention.
great vocabulary and long paragraph! You made it more understandable by putting more into it!
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I like how you said that Thomas Edisen did not invent the universal stock printer. I like how you said exactly how it works.
DeleteJonathan
Great job Caroline! Your essay was good. Your used great details in your writing. Keep on reading and writing.
DeleteHannah:)
caroline i reallly like how you put detail in you writing i really like it
Deletejustin
i like the way you discribed the light bullb!
Delete-ava
Great paragraph Caroline! You put a lot of detail and effort into it. Keep writing and reading
DeleteHannah:)
Caroline- Thomas Edison did invent the universal stock printer. It was the stock ticker that Edward Calahan invented. Edison improved the stock ticker, thus creating the stock printer.
DeleteJonah
ReplyDeleteRing, ring, ring! Yes that is a telephone, but have you heard of the phonograph? This is Thomas Edison’s best invention. This invention records messages .This is how it works you record a message then when you come back to work crank the hand crank and you hear the message. The phonograph helps workers record messages so the next day the workers don’t forget what to do. This is the best invention because phones now grew from the phonograph. Another reason is some people fainted they were so astonished. I hope you like Thomas Edison’s best invention.
i love the way you started your paragaph its creative and well worded.you made it alote more interesting because you explaind it well!!
Delete- Ava
I like how you told a lot about the phonograph.for an example this invention helps workers.It was good joseph
Deletei like the way you explained the light bullb its creative!!!!!!
DeleteThe phoneograph can be like a telephone, because they both record messages.Well, not the telephone Thomas Edison invented!
DeleteJeremy
Jonah, I like how in the begining you put ring, ring, ring. That was cool because it makes the people want to buy it.I think alot of people would buy it I know I would! Mason,
DeleteTaylor
ReplyDeleteWhat is the kind of light around? It’s not the sun, not the moon or nor the stars. It’s the light bulb the lightest, brightest, shiniest light around. This was invented by Thomas Edison. The light bulb is his best invention as I think.
The light bulb gives you light so you can see in your home. The heat inside the light bulb is so hot that it makes it glow. The light bulb helps everyone in the world. The light bulb is the best invention because it brings light to everyone.
And that concludes my essay on the light bulb I hope you liked it.
good job!I like how you said nor.Jonah
DeleteTaylor,the sun or the moon or the stars could be the light,but I see how it could be the light bulb!
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ReplyDeleteHave you ever read Thomas Edison: The Great Inventor I have. It is very informative. It is a lightbulb that I think is the best invention. The lightbulb lights up anything. The lightbulb helps people so they don’t bump into each other. I think this is the best invention you can pull a switch and it will turn the light on. I think the lightbulb is Thomas Edisons best invention.
I'm glad the lightbulb was dorned because i wouldn't want to sit with candleds but i would sit with sun light. Zoe D
DeleteI like your S.A. I like it because your intro really hooked me. Myla
DeleteCatherine
ReplyDeleteHave you ever used an Electric Pen? Well I have not. Tomas Edison invented it. I think this is his best invention ever. It is able to do a lot of things and help a lot of people. My invention is able to copy papers and help with investigation. My invention helps scientists, businesses and lots of other people. My invention is the best because it is very helpful. It also is very easy to use. Also it can do lots of things. That’s why I think the Electric Pen is Tomas Edison’s best invention.
Cat I really liked your essay. I liked how you said "I have not" that was really funny.I like your pitching to but not as much as this i really loved it softball girl. Taylor
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ReplyDeleteHave you ever broken a bone? If you have, an X-ray has told the doctors where your broken bone is. The medical X-ray is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The invention takes pictures of your bones. The medical X-ray helps people and animals. I think it is the best because it helps fix broken bones and viruses. That is why I think the X-ray is Thomas Edison’s best invention.
Ah I didn`t think of that. Maby I should of wrote about the x-ray. David
DeleteMason
ReplyDeleteHave you ever thought about if we didn’t have light bulbs? The world wouldn’t be lit and pretty. But thanks to Thomas Edison the world is lit up and pretty! I think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention. The light bulb helps people see so they don’t bump into each other. The light bulb works by an electric current that flows through the light bulb which makes the filament gets to hot that it glows. The light bulb helps people see at night. The light bulb is the best because the light bulb is not super bright that it will blind you. The light bulb is also the best when Thomas Edison was born because they only had candles. That’s why I think the light bulb is Thomas Edison’s best invention.
I would not like just having candles!!I'm sure glad the light bulb was born.
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Peyton
ReplyDeleteDid the light bulb change the world? The answer is yes because the light bulb helps us see. The filament light up our home. The light bulb helps the world because it helps kids do homework and teachers teach. My option on the light bulbs is it helps us see at night it also helps me have a good education this is why the light bulb is the best invention of Tomas Edison.
Good thinking Peyton because I wouldn`t like sitting in the dark with a candle in my hand David
DeleteJoseph
ReplyDeleteWhich do you think is the best invention of Thomas Edison’s? I think it’s the light bulb. It glows so you can see. When an electric current flows in a light bulb, it gets so hot it glows. There should be no air inside the light bulb when it is working. Anyone who needs a light can use a light bulb. So you can see. In my opinion the light bulb is the best invention of Thomas Edison .If you didn’t have the light bulb you would not be able to see. When it is dark and you turn on the light bulb there is light. That is why I like the light bulb.
David
ReplyDeleteHave you ever listed to music on an ipod? I have, and thanks to Thomas Edison we have ipods.and that’s to Thomas Edison is the best invention of Thomas Edison is the phonograph. What does it do? The phonograph could record anything you want. All you have to do is talk into the mouth hole turn the crank and listed to what you said. The phonograph could help the government record important meetings, so if they wanted to look back on a meeting. This invention is the best because it led to the iPods, and that’s why the best invention of Thomas Edison is the phonograph.
I like the details.now I know why you said the phonograph is Thomas Edison's best invention-macey
Deletei like it because now we can listin to music
DeleteZoe D
I like how you started your paragraph. it neet.
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Myla
ReplyDeleteDo you like to write in fancy letters? I like to write in fancy letters. The electric pen is Thomas Edison’s best invention because it helps you write easily. The pen works by a motorized needle. The owner writes and the needle creates a stencil and fills it in with an ink press. This pen helps people in businesses’. It helps people fill out papers faster and cooler. This is the best invention because I like to write faster and cooler. I also like it because without a copier it would take forever to make copies. I hope you like the electric pen as much as I do.
I like how you started the paragraph. For example you said do you like to right in fancy letters. Emily
DeleteZoe
ReplyDeleteWhat do you think is Thomas Edison’s best invention? The one I think is his best invention is the fire stone tire. The first reason is that the fire stone tires are helpful because if you get your tires changes and then you start to dive and then you reek and your car caught on fire your new tires wouldn’t. It would work so you don’t waste money also .It helped anyone who needs to drive and go place. This is the best because it helped lots of people go place and do stuff. That’s why the fire stone tires are Thomas Edison’s best invention.
Macey
ReplyDeleteYou’re probably wondering who invented the x-ray. Thomas Edison did in 1896.The X-ray is the best invention Thomas Edison made in my opinion. The X-ray scans people body. How does it work well a form of electromagnetic energy put in to technology to useful use creating an X-ray. The helps doctors to see a person’s body. I pick this because the X-ray helps you get better if something is broken .It can also scan pets and animals. That is why the X-ray is the best invention he invented.
I like how you started it.What you wrote was nice. -joseph
DeleteEthan
ReplyDeleteDid you ever hear of the electric pen well I’m sure you have. I think the electric pen is the best invention that Thomas Edison invented. The electric pen uses a needle that can carve stencils that can help makes copies of documents. This is how it works by you write the letter or number then it carves the stencil. The electric pen helps business people make documents now it helps us make stencils. In my opinion I think the electric pen is the best invention that Thomas Edison invented. I hope you pick the electric pen.
Ella
ReplyDeleteBlack, white, glowing screen Right an x-ray, that’s what I’m thinking of. In my opinion the medical x-ray is Tomas Edison’s best invention of all time. The medical x-ray has a board that you put on the angered body part and you will see the body part . I think the medical x-ray is the best because it could help doctors and surgeons do their job .Also because it is a very clever idea. And that’s why I think the medical x-ray is the best invention of all time
Keira-
ReplyDeleteDo you know what a light bulb dose? It brings light to your house. It also helps you to see any where they are in lanterns, lamps and much more! To see more about a light bulb read on
The light bulb lights up anywhere you want. It works by wires and circuits. It will help everyone so they can see in their houses or other places like restaurants, stores, and many more places my opinion about a the light bulb is that I think it is a very good idea and it works very well and a lot of people like it.Well that’s all I have on light bulbs to learn more go to your local library.
nice work i like your work because you explain it relly well-keira
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ReplyDeleteBlack, rubber, and round. I am talking about firestone tires. I Think firestone tires are one of the best invention of Thomas Edison. If we didn’t have tires the wheels would be scraping off the ground, and there would be sparks. It helps any type of thing that has tires like a bus bike car, and a plane, or a jet. Anyone who uses these types of transportation. I think this the best invention because cars would catch on fire because sparks would come out the back of the wheel. I think this is the best invention because they would slide if they didn’t have any tires. Thomas’s greatest invention was firestone tires.
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